Monday, January 28, 2008

One of my short storys

Hey guys, here is one of the short story's that I wrote.
The tale of the 2 white puppy's.
Once upon a time there where 2 white puppy's. Well they wanted to be black.
So they got some black paint and painted themselves.
So they went and took a bath to see if it really worked.
They got out and looked in the mirror.
It was all gone!!
So they got some Black marker and took turns holding the marker coloring each other.
And went to take a bath to see if it really worked.
It was all gone!!!!
So they got some eyeliner that was Mom's and took turn coloring each other.
Well they went to take a bath to see if it really worked.
Well it was all gone.
But by then they realized that they liked them and the way they looked just fine.
So all was well, ( except when Mom found out that they used her eyeliner!)
The end.

1 comment:

  1. This is my favorite story that you've written. I love the funny ending. Keep up the good work with you're writing. I just know that one day some of your work will be published.